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The Magic Rule of Three

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I originally wrote this story several years ago.



The Magic Rule of Three
By Morpheus

Brenda hurried down the corridor of her college campus, eager to get back to her dorm room.  She smiled eagerly, picking up her pace even more.  Today, unlike most...she had a purpose.  One which would change her life forever.

The 19 year old Brenda was a highly attractive girl, being 5 foot 7 and with a thin and very fit body.  However, in spite of her attractiveness and the way many boys admired her, she was not completely satisfied with her body, having always felt that her breasts were too small.

As soon as Brenda arrived back at her dorm room, she immediately spotted her roommate Jenny sitting on her bed, reading a book.  Brenda immediately smiled at that, licking her lips in anticipation.  This was exactly the way she wanted it.

For a moment, Brenda remained where she was, staring at her roommate.  Jenny was the same age as she was, though two inches shorter.  And though Jenny was very pretty as well, Brenda thought that her body was much better....with the major exception of Jenny's breasts.  They were D cups, which made Brenda always feel envious.

But not anymore, Brenda thought to herself, staring at Jenny with glee.  Just several days ago, Brenda had come across a magic spell.  A spell which would transfer characteristic from one person to another.  It hadn't taken her long at all to realize the possibilities with something like that.

"Hello," Brenda announced, smirking slightly as Jenny nodded an absent greeting.

"How was your day?" Jenny asked a moment later, looking up from her book.

Brenda grinned broadly, "Not bad...and it's about to get even better."

Jenny looked curious at that, then grinned, "Why?  You have a date planned for tonight...?"

"Not yet," Brenda shrugged. "But I have something I want to show you."

Beginning to get curious, Jenny put the book down and sat up, "Oh?"

With that, Brenda unfolded a piece of paper, the paper with the spell on it.  She took one look at Jenny and started to read it aloud.  Once the spell had been completed, Brenda felt a strange tingling along her skin...almost like static electricity.

"All right," Brenda laughed, knowing from the spell that the only thing left was to name the trait that she wanted to take from Jenny.  "Breasts."

Suddenly, Brenda let out a loud gasp as she felt the tingling that centered in her breasts.  It felt so nice and warm.  And then she could actually feel her breasts beginning to grow...to press more and more against her shirt.

Jenny stood up and gasped in shock and confusion "What the hell?"

Her hands grabbed for her own breasts, which were quickly starting to shrink down, deflating almost as if they were two balloons being emptied.  Her shirt and bra were both starting to hang looser on her, and continued to do so until she was completely flat chested.

"My BREASTS," Jenny gasped, a tinge of horror beginning to creep into her voice.

Brenda just burst out laughing as her own breasts finished growing, pressing so hard against her shirt that she was almost positive that the seams were going to burst.  It felt so tight on her that it was almost painful.

"My breasts," Brenda gasped out in delight, grabbing hold of her now larger mammaries, amazed at just how large they were.   They were bigger than Jenny's had been.  Then she grinned even more, realizing that the spell had given her Jenny's breast size on top of what she already had.

"Brenda...?" Jenny stared at her with narrowed and suspicious eyes.

Brenda just exclaimed, "IT WORKED!"

As Brenda stood there, feeling incredibly triumphant, she thought about the spell that she still held in her hand, thinking about all the other things that she might be able to steal.  Though she'd only been thinking about her breasts until then, now she was beginning to realize that she could do even more with it.

However, Brenda suddenly paused, realizing that the strange static tingling that she'd felt was still there.  It was as if the very air in the room was all charged up.   She was a little startled at this since the spell was only supposed to transfer one characteristic each time it was used, and the new weight on her chest offered ample proof that it had already been used.

"A magic spell," Jenny hissed furiously at Brenda, tearing her hands from her newly flat chest while glaring at her roommate.  Then she took a deep breath, calming down a little and adding, "Some sort of theft of transference spell..."

"There's nothing you can do about it now," Brenda smirked, the exhilaration over her new breasts overcoming the faint guilt that she felt for having done that to Jenny.

Jenny just stood there for a moment, glaring at Brenda while a calculating look started to form in her eyes.  Finally, Jenny started to smirk as well.

"You know," Jenny mused, "I think I like your idea about taking my breasts....so I'm going to do the same to you."

Suddenly, Brenda let out a loud gasp of surprise as she felt the tingling in her chest again.  But this time, instead of swelling larger, her breasts were starting to shrink back down.  A single glance over at Jenny revealed that her roommates were starting to grow back.

"My breasts," Brenda gasped out again, this time with the same fear and confusion that Jenny had used such a short time below.  That horror increased as she realized that her breasts hadn't stopped shrinking once they'd reached their original size...but that they were continuing to deflate.

Jenny grabbed hold of her breast, wincing as they grew large enough that her bra was pinching painfully tight against her.  She quickly scrambled to remove her shirt and bra, standing there topless...revealing her breasts which were now the same size that Brenda's had been just a moment before.  Now she...not Brenda was the one with their combined breast sizes, while Brenda became as flat chested as a boy.

"Wow," Jenny gasped after a few seconds of just holding them, "They feel great..."  Then she suddenly giggled, "As if the boys didn't stare at them enough before..."

"What...?" Brenda gasped in confusion, "How...?"

Jenny just grinned, "That was nice...but what about your muscle tone too..."

At that very moment, Brenda felt the tingling running through her body again, this time focusing on her muscles.  She stared at Jenny, seeing that Jenny's body was changing...becoming more fit.  Her muscles and definition both increased as Brenda watched, until Jenny was even fitter and more athletic looking than Brenda had ever been.

It was only then that Brenda looked down at herself and nearly screamed in horror.  Her arms and legs had lost all muscular definition.  They looked scrawny...little more than skin and bones.  In fact, her whole body had become like that.

"I'm a toothpick," Brenda gasped out in horror, thinking that she had to look like a human skeleton.  And she felt so weak....so very weak that she didn't think that she'd be able to do much more than just move around.

"And your height," Jenny added, "I'll take 7 inches of your height..."

Brenda was horrified to feel the changes hitting her again.  Her clothes, which had already become extremely loose with the loss of her breasts and muscle tone, become even more so.  They seemed to be growing larger and larger on her, even while Jenny was growing larger as well.

"Oh my God," Jenny gasped out as her pants pulled tighter on her, making her quickly start tearing them off as she continued to grow.

Jenny felt her very body increasing, growing larger and larger.  She stared in rapt amazement as a picture on their dorm wall went from being eye level, to being that she had to look down on it.

When the changes stopped, Jenny stood there, silently staring around the room.   Everything so much smaller than before.  Everything looked so different from 6 feet tall than it did from 5 foot 5.  And then she noticed Brenda, who was so tiny in comparison at her new height of 5 feet tall.

"Oh my God," Jenny gasped, hardly able to believe that this scrawny little creature that looked more like a starving little boy than anything else had once been her pretty roommate.

However, Jenny quickly tore her eyes from Brenda, then looked down at herself, smiling at just how incredible she now looked and felt.  Her whole body had improved more than a hundred percent.  She felt as though she had suddenly become the sexiest looking girl in school.

Brenda however was horrified, staring at her near giant sized roommate and the room which had grown much too large.  She struggled with her loose clothes, afraid of tripping over them.

"How?" Brenda gasped in confusion, "The spell...?"

Jenny looked at the piece of paper which had been dropped during the transformation, then reached down to pick it up.  "This spell?" Jenny asked, already looking at it.

Nodding her head timidly, Brenda whispered, "Yeah..."

She couldn't believe how badly things had suddenly turned around on her.  One moment, the spell had worked incredibly well, giving her the great breasts that she'd always desired.  And then the next thing she knew, she had lost absolutely everything.  She had become some sort of freak.

"Trying to steal my breasts was not nice," Jenny announced, glaring firmly at Brenda, who could only cringe in response.

"I'm sorry...," Brenda stammered, sorry that it had ever gone wrong.  But why had it gone wrong?

Jenny frowned thoughtfully, looking at the paper in her hand.  "Okay," she sighed, giving another look at Brenda, "I think you've learned your lesson.  Maybe you just got it backwards.  How about I cast the spell on you this time, and we'll see if we can turn things back to normal?"

Brenda stared up at Jenny, quickly seeing her opportunity.  If Jenny cast the spell so that she could take things from Jenny that way, then she would be the one with absolutely everything, and Jenny would be the pitiful little freak.  Brenda loved the idea and couldn't wait.

"Yeah," Brenda exclaimed, "Do it..."

Jenny just smiled at that, and it wasn't quite the nice gentle smile that Brenda had expected. There seemed to be something else in it that she didn't quite like.

"You know," Jenny mused aloud, almost smirking, "there is one other thing that could have been the reason why your spell backfired..."

Brenda blinked, "What's that...?"

"The magic rule of three," Jenny answered with mock innocence.  At Brenda's blank look, she grinned, "Don't tell me that you were messing around with magic without even knowing how it works.  That's not very smart."

"WHAT is it?" Brenda demanded, then cringed back as she suddenly remembered that Jenny could crush her with little effort now.

"The magic rule of three," Jenny stated, "Is the law of magic which states that if you cast a spell on someone without their permission, the spell backfires on YOU...THREE times stronger."

Brenda just stared at Jenny in shock and horror.  And as Jenny started to read the spell from the page, Brenda fearfully blurted out, "You can't do that without getting hit too...."

But as Jenny finished reading the spell, she looked down at Brenda and shook her head almost sadly. "You forgot...you already gave me permission."

Brenda gasped in horror as she realized that Jenny was right.  Jenny had tricked her into giving permission to use the spell on her.

"You...you can't," Brenda started, then comforted herself with the knowledge that Jenny had already taken everything from her.  Except....she gasped, thinking about her nice blonde hair..."

Jenny just frowned and shook her head.  "What you tried doing to me wasn't nice.  Or smart.  And because of that, I'm going to take...50 IQ points."

Suddenly, Brenda blinked, feeling a strange dizzy feeling in her head.  She looked way up at Jenny, almost crinking her neck to do so.  For a moment, she was almost sure that it hadn't worked.  But then she paused, feeling confused and unsure.  Everything seemed more confusing all of a sudden.

For a moment, Jenny just remained where she was, staring down at Brenda and letting out a long sigh.   She looked at the pitiful thing that Brenda had become, thinking about what Brenda had tried doing to her and how much Brenda had earned her fate.

Then Jenny looked down at herself, smiling at the sight of it.  She quickly looked at her reflection in the mirror that hung on the wall, deciding that she absolutely loved her new self.

Of course, Jenny knew that she was going to have to get all new clothes that would fit her altered body.  And then there would be the problem of explaining her changes and Brenda's to everyone, though she knew that she would come up with a great solution.  She was after all, a very intelligent girl.  Thanks to her roommates generous donation.

While Jenny was thinking about that, she carefully folded the spell, deciding that she had enough for the moment but wanted to keep it just in case she ever wanted to use it again.  And for a brief moment, she was even thankful to Brenda for bringing her that spell and improving her life so much.

Finally, Jenny took another look at Brenda, and told her, "Since you helped me so much, I'll give you two final pieces of advice.  Never mess around with something like magic when you don't know the rules.  And two...never try messing with someone who knows more about it than you do."


THE END
Brenda finds a magic spell to take traits from other people but doesn't fully understand the rules.
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jesus that went dark real fast.